loves anguish… thirst – an open poem letter

I self-destruct when

your words are lost from my life

dread pervades this void

 

dread pervades this void

as my ego begs for hope

life devastates me

 

life devastates me

when your eyes embrace with mine

own          these thoughts hunger

 

own these thoughts           hunger

and thirst           to demolish walls

for identities

 

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haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-316 destruct and self

Destruct and Self

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7 thoughts on “loves anguish… thirst – an open poem letter

    • I made the form up so I call it a
      Shi Rensa Haiku.

      With chain (Rensa) being the adjective closest to the noun (Haiku) because it is the primary descriptive of the phrase. (Yeah, I looked into Japanese sentence structure.)

      Shi=Four
      Rensa=Chain, connection
      Haiku=Poem

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