Ovi Poetry Challenge 9: RIGHT is your inspiration.

First, remember, YOU DON’T HAVE TO USE THE WORD of the CHALLENGE in your poem, but use it if you like.

 

OVI POETRY

Ovi is a syllabic/metre poetry form. In this case, Ovi is from India, originating in the Marathi language. The Ovi  has been in use in written form since the 13th Century, but the women’s ovee/ovi predates the literary form by at least the 12th Century.

The Ovi are in general, lyrical folk songs expressing love, social irony, and heroic events. They are written in the following scheme.

4 line stanzas, as few as one stanza and up to as many as you like.

8 syllables or less per line

Rhyming is AAAb. The second stanza would be CCCd. The third, EEEf. And so on. Meaning nothing in one stanza must rhyme with anything in the previous stanza. The fourth line does not rhyme.

Example:

Roly Poly by Judi Van Gorder

The big toothed tot with golden hair
picked up a bug on Sister’s dare,
it rolled into a ball right there
and won her springtime heart.

Notice the rhyming pattern is AAAb or
A
A
A
b

My Attempt

Blue flowers continue to grow,
with the shadow’s making them glow,
giving life to darkness and woe,
dying each year to yet return.

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6 thoughts on “Ovi Poetry Challenge 9: RIGHT is your inspiration.

  1. The Debate

    We came together one fine night,
    positions frozen, no thin light
    of compromise, the oral fight
    commenced in the darkened town hall.

    Facebook had been our sparing ground
    where wit and weariness abound,
    sharp verbal thrusts, a proving ground
    for pointless prattle in the void.

    A public airing seemed just right,
    a taste of democratic rite,
    leavened with humour, and a slight
    nibble of crow in humble pie.

    Alas, though the notion was great,
    we could not arrange a debate,
    for aversion would be our fate,
    ill feeling ‘til the end of time.

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