Ovi Poetry Challenge 78: TEMPTATION is your inspiration.

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OVI POETRY

Ovi is a syllabic/metre poetry form. In this case, Ovi is from India, originating in the Marathi language. The Ovi  has been in use in written form since the 13th Century, but the women’s ovee/ovi predates the literary form by at least the 12th Century.

The Ovi are in general, lyrical folk songs expressing love, social irony, and heroic events. They are written in the following scheme.

4 line stanzas, as few as one stanza and up to as many as you like.

8 syllables or less per line

Rhyming is AAAb. The second stanza would be CCCd. The third, EEEf. And so on. Meaning nothing in one stanza must rhyme with anything in the previous stanza. The fourth line does not rhyme.

Example:

Roly Poly by Judi Van Gorder

The big toothed tot with golden hair
picked up a bug on Sister’s dare,
it rolled into a ball right there
and won her springtime heart.

Notice the rhyming pattern is AAAb or
A
A
A
b

My Attempt

Blue flowers continue to grow,
with the shadow’s making them glow,
giving life to darkness and woe,
dying each year to yet return.

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11 thoughts on “Ovi Poetry Challenge 78: TEMPTATION is your inspiration.”

  6. Quivering on Craving’s Cliff

    How weak I am, it’s hard to tell,

    for I tremble under the spell

    of  MORE, though I am a hard sell –

    and shopping leaves me exhausted.

    I have most everything I need.

    I’ve resisted the lure of greed-

    my limbs could use  a tad more speed-

    but other than that, I’m just fine.

    As for old earth, its in sad shape.

    held together by  masking tape

    and bailing wire. Will it escape

    from trillions of human footprints?

    Clearly I have little to share

    aside from desire and despair –

    earth and I endure wear and tear-

    mine , to be sure, a blip in time.

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