Ovi Poetry Challenge 82: AWARE is your inspiration.

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OVI POETRY

Ovi is a syllabic/metre poetry form. In this case, Ovi is from India, originating in the Marathi language. The Ovi  has been in use in written form since the 13th Century, but the women’s ovee/ovi predates the literary form by at least the 12th Century.

The Ovi are in general, lyrical folk songs expressing love, social irony, and heroic events. They are written in the following scheme.

4 line stanzas, as few as one stanza and up to as many as you like.

8 syllables or less per line

Rhyming is AAAb. The second stanza would be CCCd. The third, EEEf. And so on. Meaning nothing in one stanza must rhyme with anything in the previous stanza. The fourth line does not rhyme.

Example:

Roly Poly by Judi Van Gorder

The big toothed tot with golden hair
picked up a bug on Sister’s dare,
it rolled into a ball right there
and won her springtime heart.

Notice the rhyming pattern is AAAb or
A
A
A
b

My Attempt

Blue flowers continue to grow,
with the shadow’s making them glow,
giving life to darkness and woe,
dying each year to yet return.

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12 thoughts on “Ovi Poetry Challenge 82: AWARE is your inspiration.”

  3. North of 49

    From Trumpet’s Mara Lago perch,

    this charmless man, fury and smirch

    galore, we watch him lunge and lurch,

    bear witness to false fealty.

    With eagle eye I scan his brain,

    a sordid venture not to gain

    absent insight, a daisy chain

    of sorts, searching for awareness.

    A patriot I’ve never been,

    not a true Canadian sin,

    per se, more a casual sheen,

    for we are not wavers of flags.

    Yet this, this bluster from the south,

    from a man not thoughtful, more mouth

    than truth, a loud millionaire mouse,

    wagging tails, chaotic tales.

    Here, mostly north of forty-nine,

    a fanciful yet real line,

    we will prevail, a steep incline

    perhaps, but we’ll be united.

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