Ovi Poetry 89: FLEETING is your inspiration.

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It’s nice to remember that things aren’t permanent. They always change. Just keep walking and you’ll get to the other side and you’ll likely learn a lot along the way.

OVI POETRY

Ovi is a syllabic/metre poetry form. In this case, Ovi is from India, originating in the Marathi language. The Ovi  has been in use in written form since the 13th Century, but the women’s ovee/ovi predates the literary form by at least the 12th Century.

The Ovi are in general, lyrical folk songs expressing love, social irony, and heroic events. They are written in the following scheme.

4 line stanzas, as few as one stanza and up to as many as you like.

8 syllables or less per line

Rhyming is AAAb. The second stanza would be CCCd. The third, EEEf. And so on. Meaning nothing in one stanza must rhyme with anything in the previous stanza. The fourth line does not rhyme.

Example:

Roly Poly by Judi Van Gorder

The big toothed tot with golden hair
picked up a bug on Sister’s dare,
it rolled into a ball right there
and won her springtime heart.

Notice the rhyming pattern is AAAb or
A
A
A
b

My Attempt

Blue flowers continue to grow,
with the shadow’s making them glow,
giving life to darkness and woe,
dying each year to yet return.

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10 thoughts on “Ovi Poetry 89: FLEETING is your inspiration.”

  2. Backdrop

    So quiet is  my Denman morn,

    a wintry calm, spring close to born,

    borne on the wind, winter well worn

    yes quiet, but peace is fleeting.

    Elsewhere, deal makings in the mix,

    Peace at a price, bargaining tricks,

    tit for tat, precious politics –

    Barnum Trump, Circus ring master.

    The Bully has us by the nose,

    a shameless King minus his clothes

    his naked greed fully exposed –

    Midas fiddling whilst the earth burns.

    Gaza, Ukraine-deals to be made,

    geo-political senses frayed,

    all to insure the Piper’s paid-

    and we’ll be left with the leavings.

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