Ovi Poetry 93: RISE is your inspiration.

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OVI POETRY

Ovi is a syllabic/metre poetry form. In this case, Ovi is from India, originating in the Marathi language. The Ovi  has been in use in written form since the 13th Century, but the women’s ovee/ovi predates the literary form by at least the 12th Century.

The Ovi are in general, lyrical folk songs expressing love, social irony, and heroic events. They are written in the following scheme.

4 line stanzas, as few as one stanza and up to as many as you like.

8 syllables or less per line

Rhyming is AAAb. The second stanza would be CCCd. The third, EEEf. And so on. Meaning nothing in one stanza must rhyme with anything in the previous stanza. The fourth line does not rhyme.

Example:

Roly Poly by Judi Van Gorder

The big toothed tot with golden hair
picked up a bug on Sister’s dare,
it rolled into a ball right there
and won her springtime heart.

Notice the rhyming pattern is AAAb or
A
A
A
b

My Attempt

Blue flowers continue to grow,
with the shadow’s making them glow,
giving life to darkness and woe,
dying each year to yet return.

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11 thoughts on “Ovi Poetry 93: RISE is your inspiration.”

  6. The Level of Incompetence

    Political fates rise and fall,

    our words hear the clarion call

    of truth, our backs against the wall

    and we foolishly obfuscate

    I watch these intel chiefs tell lies,

    falsehoods swarming like drunken flies,

    deceptions oozing from their eyes,

    the whole affair brilliantly sad.

    Amateur night in Washington,

    the whole truths out, their lies undone,

    yet fabrications are still spun

    and we are left shaking our heads.

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