I’ve written a couple or more posts recently on how to write an American style cinquain developed by Adelaide Crapsey. But… sometimes I can get a bit wordy. So, let’s get unwordy.
If you like Haiku, which this blog has a history of, you’ll like the cinquain. It’s 5 lines with a syllable structure of 2/4/6/8/2. This isn’t by accident. Adelaide was a fan of haiku.
Here is an example of an American cinquain I wrote:
Remember
Away
To foreign lands
And dreams of saving hopes,
Reality of breaking hearts.
Look back.
I wrote about Memorial Day and the soldiers who went to war. Some had hopes and dreams of changing the world, saving lives, and bringing freedom where there was none. Many never came back, or have since passed away, bringing sadness to their loved ones. We remember those who we’ve lost on Memorial Day.
To write an American cinquain, I took the idea I just shared and made it as concise as I could, using the most descriptive words I could think of at the time. The first four lines are one feeling and are moving forward, with the final line flipping to look back and is related to the first line.
And that’s how an American cinquain often is. Here with ‘Remember’, you can see the relationship of ‘Away’ and ‘Look back’. It can be seen in two ways. One way is those who have left, gone away, can look back after they’ve left, or secondly, it can be the loved ones looking back on the memories.
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