Annette chimes in with something I call “Let it grow, let it grow.”
To bust through the earth
The seedling must feel its strength
And dream of the sky
©2015 Annette Rochelle Aben
Annette chimes in with something I call “Let it grow, let it grow.”
To bust through the earth
The seedling must feel its strength
And dream of the sky
©2015 Annette Rochelle Aben
First in is Juliet with Healing Wounds. Stole ,the tablet to do this reblog. Migraine is already spiking from using it. Felt I had to try to do this though as I said I would in the challenge post.
Battered Wife Seeking Better Life
Today’s prompt words made me think of the phrase “Not all wounds are visible.” Along with my own personal story, there are many others that have been through the same situation. There are some out there that think because there is not physical violence that they are not in an abusive situation.
This haiku is for all of us.
Prompts: Luck & Hope
Time will heal all wounds,
Hopefully that phrase is true,
If so, we’re lucky.
First in is Annette with “The Real Take Five!”
Freely give yourself a great opportunity.
A great opportunity is in your own mind.
Much Love, Success, and Respect
Ronovan
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TJ Paris is first in this week with a great Haiku as well as his usual great photography on display.
Life is too short to drink bad wine
A breeze blew through the gates of this temple and played with the silken flags. I am not sure if I was supposed to be there but it was too picturesque not to take a photo.
Ronovan writes promts this week are free and think. A lovely pairing indeed!
Thanks to Ronovan for his ongoing inspiration and also for the time and effort that he puts into the challenge. Thanks also for the wonderful and inspiring Haikuists out there who show what can be done with this deceptively simple form.
I have made a compilation of some of the Haiku I have written as part of “TJ’s Household Haiku Challenge” below if you would like to read some more haiku based on prompts from household objects. You can find this week’s prompt by clicking HERE .
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People say things they don’t mean. Okay, maybe they mean them but they don’t intend nor do plan to keep those feelings. In the moment they have a burst of anger and say stupid things. I know, I said the bad word, stupid. At least it’s a bad word in my house.
Maybe it’s the TV my son watches but he does well with not saying things to hurt feelings. Gotta love Classics on Hulu.
Angry young lives should
Be taken seriously,
Guide your tongue wisely.
Much Love, Success, and Respect
Ronovan
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Annette is in first this week with Through the Hole.
Angie Lin and her The Heart’s Secrets.
lock away my heart
and the feelings stashed within
i’ll never gab of
(Lock away my heart and the feelings stashed within.
And the feelings stashed within, I’ll never gab of.)
Always so close to being first poster. ;; Ah, well. For this week’s Haiku prompt. I suppose that this week, my submission was more flowery, bubbly, but who knows.
✪ Angie
What do you guys think of Florence’s Haiku advice? First in this week.
RonovanWrites Haiku Challenge #49 – this week’s prompt words are ‘gab’ and ‘lock’. Tough indeed!
Join in, see what you can do 🙂 and have fun!
Liar close thy mouth
The truth will out, don’t pretend
Lock that precious heart.
– FlorenceT
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Swifty Sue Vincent comes in first this week with Rhythm. A good writer’s Haiku.
Sue the scribe first in this week. 🙂
Some of you may have run across two strange words while reading the Haiku offerings in the Haiku Challenge each week.
Those words are Tanka and Haibun. Both look a lot like Haiku. There is a reason for that.
Haibun is a Haiku but is more prose related than poetry related. A great deal of what many of you write is a Haibun as opposed to a Haiku.
What you do is write the prose part and then write a Haiku related to it. A lot of you do that and I love it. The content can be autobiographical, non-fiction, or fictional. Write your prose in a paragraph or two, and often with a little more flare than a normal paragraph, if you choose to do it that way, or simply write a couple of paragraphs the normal way. Then follow that with your Haiku that sums up what you said in a Haiku of the 5/7/5 syllable structure but is more one long sentence made up of the three lines instead of the usually Haiku in English of two sentences made up using the second line as a common part of each sentence.
You will be at ease
Once trying this new method
Of writing your life.
That’s a Haibun type Haiku. I wrote a paragraph about something, and then the Haiku summed it up.
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You will be at ease
Once you try this new method,
Write your life with ease.
Here you have that second line being the end of a sentence.
You will be at easy once you try this new method.
And then it is the beginning of a second sentence.
Once you try this new method write your life with ease.
This one is pretty simple as well.
You have the syllable structure of 5/7/5/7/7.
You have the upper phrase of the 5/7/5.
And you have the lower phrase of the 7/7.
The upper phrase would be your traditional Haiku in English style. The lower phrase then is connected by that third line.
I learned of some new
Styles of poetry today,
Made up of many
I could spend all of my days
Writing each poetry style.
You can see how line three connects with the lower phrase. (Bold above is only for this article, not to be included in actual Tanka.)
Made up of many, I could spend all of my days writing each poetry style.
I know my examples here aren’t the greatest, but I wanted to give you the idea of what the styles are like. If you are doing the Haiku Challenges, it’s fine to try the Haibun and Tanka out instead. Stretch your creativity and expand your experience.
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Desire falls to whim
In a heart’s beat symphony
I am all with you.
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And it came to pass,
Ill control over the world,
Put to rest that day.
The earth rests her heart,
While we deny her our love,
Her will replies ill.
A National Poetry Month Poem.
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